Since I got the disease of Mutiple Sclerosis, I've have a long time not to go outside. For my father hopes me to do some activities, he took me to walk to the supermarket near my home this afternoon. I've have about half a year not to go there, even the distance only takes 300 miles from my home to the supermarket.
We bought some cheespieces and toasts for the new electric oven to bake for breakfast.
I feel consolate that I've convalesced in the degree that can walk without any help. But I really hope to convalesce to the degree the same with the situaction before I got the disease.(110 words)
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14.03.2004
Since I got the disease of Multiple Sclerosis, I have not to go outside for a long time. My father helps me to do some activities, he took me to walk to the supermarket near my home this afternoon. I have not gone there for about half a year, even the distance only takes 300m from my home to the supermarket.
We bought some cheesepieces and toast for the new electric oven to bake for breakfast.
I feel consolate that I've convalesced to the degree that I can walk without any help.But I really hope to convalesce to the same degree as before I got the disease.
We bought some cheespieces and toasts for the new electric oven to bake for breakfast.
I feel consolate that I've convalesced in the degree that can walk without any help. But I really hope to convalesce to the degree the same with the situaction before I got the disease.(110 words)
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14.03.2004
Since I got the disease of Multiple Sclerosis, I have not to go outside for a long time. My father helps me to do some activities, he took me to walk to the supermarket near my home this afternoon. I have not gone there for about half a year, even the distance only takes 300m from my home to the supermarket.
We bought some cheesepieces and toast for the new electric oven to bake for breakfast.
I feel consolate that I've convalesced to the degree that I can walk without any help.But I really hope to convalesce to the same degree as before I got the disease.
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Since I got the disease of Mutiple Sclerosis, I've have a long time not to go outside. (I haven’t gone outside for a long time.) For my father hopes me to do some activities, he took me walk to the supermarket near my home this afternoon. (he walked me to t he supermarket near my home this afternoon ) I've have about half a year not to go there, even the dist ance only takes 300 miles from my home to the supermarket. (I ha ven’t went there about half a year) We bought some cheespieces and toasts for the new electric oven to bake for breakfast. (We bought some cheeses and toast for bre akfast by the new toaster.) I feel consolate that I've convalesced in the degree that can walk without any help. (I feel gratified that I’ve convales ced in the degree of that I can walk without any help.) But I really hope to convalesce to the degree the same with the situaction before I got the disease. (But I really hope to conva lesce to the degree of the same situation that I haven’t been s ick.
不知道這樣改看不看得懂耶 括起來的地方就是我改過的部份 希望你看得懂才好
1. he walked me to ...真的可以醬用嗎:p... 2. I haven’t went ...have+過去式? 3. We bought some cheeses and toast for breakfast by the new toa ster...我家是買了新烤箱不是烤麵包機呀XD 4. But I really hope to convalesce to the degree of the same sit uation that I haven’t been sick....我還是覺得怪怪的@@...不知怎麼 改...偶再找書好了 剛溫唷...讓我看到一些盲點了^^"
第1個 其實我是查Dr.eye找到的 我也不知道對不對 呵 第2個 完成式是have+pp go的三個形式是go-went-gone 第3個 哈哈 不好意思ㄚ 誤以為是烤麵包機 第4個 我自己也不知道自己寫得對不對 一切都憑感覺寫的 =..=
第一個用法咧...查過字典了 是可以的.... ex:意思是...牽著...走 or 拉著（人）行走...or 使（馬等）走路... 用法呢 像這樣:The policeman walked the man off.(警察將那個人拉走 了)/ We walked our hourses down the stream.(我們牽著馬走到小溪). ... 其他的話...我在看看吧
But I really hope to recorver as the same condition that I was b efore I got sick. 其實...我也不知道這樣對不對ㄟ.....就翻成這樣囉...~僅供參考用
But I really hope to recover as the condition that I was before getting the disease......前面用字改成醬不錯ㄝ 不過後面我自己改還是怪怪低...就只好先醬囉@@